Whoever was "grading" this article missed something in the second column. She started a sentence with a conjunction: "But I can understand..."
Carl M
Well, some of the criticism in that thing is questionable and only there to make it seem that every sentence had something wrong with it. More importantly, I think that the reader had a faulty sarcasm detector.
dale
I hope she turns out to be really hot 'cause she's going to have to get job otherwise.